Please HELP me

[soOoOoma]

Hello there everybody
How r u
Hope u r fine & doing well

Please please Please
HELP me

I have homework & I must handle it Sunday
I am going to write it here & I hope from everybody
especially moderators help me in answering it


(( : Here is a piece of student writing , written be a low intermediate student

Daily schedule]]]
She starts at 9:00 reading all the e-mail received. She use to keep reading and answering them till 10:00 . Then she carry on writing letters to the customers who are waiting for their orders to be delivered.
She stops at 11:30 to make a break and have a coffe in 30 minutes. After the coffe she start making telephone calls till 1:30 when it is time to have lunch.
At 2:30 she make the photocopies that his boss needs for a meeting that will be tomorrow. She go on making copies till 4:00 that she start to check the e-mails and correspondence. She keep doing this till 5:00 that she [[[stops her job to go home

Identify and cassify the learner′s errors--
?What can you deduce about the learner′s linguistic development from these errors --
(( What steps would you take to improve the learner′s development --


Please DEARS do ur best
I appreciate any replay &

:

THANX

[حـــــلا]

[فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات] انا ميح بالانجليزي وباذن الله تجدين من يساعدك لاني ما ادري وش السالفة ولوجداوي هنا كان تمام بس الله العالم وين اراضيه

[حسام]

الرجال شكله يبغانا نحل له الواجب <<<< homework يا ذكي

ويقول ان الواجب يبي يسلمه يوم الاحد <<<< I must handle it Sunday

وبيكتب المطلوب ويبغى من المشرفين مساعدته <<<<< والله ورطه

اما الواجب فشكله كذا والله اعلم انه يسرد الجدول اليومي لموظفه في مكتب او شي

والمطلوب ايجاد الاخطاء !! <<< Identify and cassify the learner′s errors--

انا بصراحه ما فهمت ايش يقصد بــ learner′s

لكن على العموم يا اخي /اختي

ترانا ما فهمنا وش المطلوب بالضبط

يا ليت توضح والتوضيح بالعربي لو سمحت :)

تذكرت ايام الثانوية واختبارات الانجليزي كلها تخمين في تخمين

وفي الاخير فل مارك <<<<<< افلقني يا فل مارك

[بنووووتة]

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[COLOR="Red"][SIZE="5"]Please please Please
HELP me




(( : Here is a piece of student writing , written be a low intermediate student

Daily schedule]]]
She starts at 9:00 reading all the e-mail received. She use to keep reading and answering them till 10:00 . Then she carry on writing letters to the customers who are waiting for their orders to be delivered.
She stops at 11:30 to make a break and have a coffe in 30 minutes. After the coffe she start making telephone calls till 1:30 when it is time to have lunch.
At 2:30 she make the photocopies that his boss needs for a meeting that will be tomorrow. She go on making copies till 4:00 that she start to check the e-mails and correspondence. She keep doing this till 5:00 that she [[[stops her job to go home

Identify and cassify the learner′s errors--
?What can you deduce about the learner′s linguistic development from these errors --
(( What steps would you take to improve the learner′s development --

]

Hello there brother or sister
I really would like to help you with your homework

>>>Identify and cassify the learner′s errors--
Well this person is just writing what they were doing on a daily basis
The learner needs to put her words in a paragraph form
so that it would look like an essay instead of a schedual

?What can you deduce about the learner′s linguistic development from these errors --
Well this person like i said is not putting her words into action. Instead she is just writing down what she did today
she needs to put it in paragraph form

What steps would you take to improve the learner′s development
I would use an intoductory paragraph to tell the reader what she is going to write
and then 3 body paragraphs stating what she is doing today
then a conclusion restating the introductory.

I hope that i helped you and have a great night

[soOoOoma]

السلام عليكم

//

حلا

مشكوره اختي على
تواجدك ..
والله يعطيك العافيه
انتِ وجداوي اللي مدري
من هو ^_^

//

حسام

بالأول انا بنت مو رجال ^_^
وشاكره لك خيو تواجدك
والواجب الحمد لله سلمته امس
وإن شاء الله فل مارك

//

girl

Thanx dear 4 helping
I am really grateful for what
you have done
Thanx again
& wish u the endless happiness

//

ur sis

[بنووووتة]

??? did it help you
plese let me know
and no problem we are
greatful for your questions
ask and we wil answer hopefully

[حسام]

هوبفلي وهابنس

حركات يا بنوته

اصلا انا اعرف عنقليزي بس ماني عارف اكتب بسرعة <<<<< كثر منها

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يارب فل مارك

:)

[بنووووتة]

هوبفلي وهابنس

حركات يا بنوته

:)
احم احم

اصلا انا اعرف عنقليزي بس ماني عارف اكتب بسرعة <<<<< كثر منها

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يارب فل مارك

عنقليزي ??? اعرف كيف تكتبه لا تفضح روحك...يا اللي مسوي نفسك فاهم:36_1_37:

عادي عادي لا يحمر وجهك

انا اعطيك كورس انجليزي

[التاسو]

الله يعين وعسى الله يفقهنا بالدين قبل الدنيا والله ماعرفت الا بليز هلب مي والباقي على الدنيا السلام